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Legend_of_Moose Skilled Player
Posts : 127 Join date : 2010-02-15 Age : 30 Location : Baltimore
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Thu Apr 15, 2010 9:09 pm | |
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KJC Smart Player
Posts : 230 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 33 Location : Local Group of Virgo - Outer Reaches of 200 billion stars Spiral - Orion Spur - Solar System of Sun - Earth - North America - Canada - Alberta - Edmonton..
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Sat Apr 17, 2010 5:42 am | |
| Awesome stuff, This one actually makes sense. I can see Linkin Park using this as lyrics. | |
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baneofdeath Brilliant Player
Posts : 263 Join date : 2009-07-11 Location : I am undead-boy lets be clear about that.
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:28 am | |
| I wrote a song to play my guitar along with... This song is from Robert Neville's point of view during the events of I am Legend
The once crowded streets are bare and grim the one place i called home has gone away my wife and kids have been torn away so what reason do i have to stay
They call me a legend but im just a man i may be strong, but i am condemmed by day i walk the empty streets and by night i struggle to sleep
its been 3 long years and now our end is far too near why did something so good have to lead us all astray oh how i wish to be saved
they call me a legend but im just a man they call me strong but i am condemmed by day i walk to empty streets by night i just struggle to sleep
*Solo*
I.. Just Try... to last... thru the night
so why should i continue to fight
They call me a legend but im just a man they call me strong but i am condemmed by day i walk, the empty streets and by night i just cry and weep
*same riff by single strums per chord* Its been 3 long years and ive yet to see a friendly face oh how i wish to erase the mistakes weve all made for now the hour is too late.
For anyone who actually knows how to play the guitar here is the Tab
Chords used:
Intro:
Am F C C Am F C C
Verse: (strumming = Down up down up, then strum up down up as you change chords)
C add 9 Em7 G G C add 9 Em7 G G C add 9 Em Am F C F C D
Chorus: (down, slight pause, up, down, up, down, short pause, up down up down.
C add 9 ( I lift up my pointer for the chorus part) Em7, chord X ( I don’t know what its called) my pointer goes on the 2nd fret 4th string down middle on the 3rd fret of the 5th string down and pinkie on the 5th of the 6th string) then I do a D. this repeats once | |
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Glorn2 Ohh Captain our Captain
Posts : 3721 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 35 Location : Guilford, NY
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:34 am | |
| Dust always blowing about the town The meadow grass could be cemented down Smooth-laid like thatch with the heavy dew And there's more to it than just window-views
Call it a day, I wish they might have said The living come with grassy tread Oh, give us pleasure in the flowers today; Nothing gold can stay.
Some say the world will end in fire Where wheels have freshly sliced the April mire. The crows above the forest call; We dance round in a ring and suppose, But the Secret sits in the middle and knows.
=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\=\= This stacks right up there with Xanadu, but it is a pretty unique poem. It is a cento written completely from individual lines from Robert Frost poems. | |
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sami_gurl You Got a Blue Star!
Posts : 586 Join date : 2009-07-27 Age : 34 Location : Hell, Florida
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:03 pm | |
| - KJC wrote:
- Awesome stuff, This one actually makes sense. I can see Linkin Park using this as lyrics.
that one is the only one that actually makes sense or you are to dull to understand the rest? | |
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Legend_of_Moose Skilled Player
Posts : 127 Join date : 2010-02-15 Age : 30 Location : Baltimore
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:53 pm | |
| I actually took offense to you comparing it to linkin park -.- | |
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sami_gurl You Got a Blue Star!
Posts : 586 Join date : 2009-07-27 Age : 34 Location : Hell, Florida
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:55 pm | |
| why? dont you know! linkin park is master poetry. -.- yeah. its pretty annoying to have sometihing you work on pretty hard compared to blah music... | |
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KJC Smart Player
Posts : 230 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 33 Location : Local Group of Virgo - Outer Reaches of 200 billion stars Spiral - Orion Spur - Solar System of Sun - Earth - North America - Canada - Alberta - Edmonton..
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:36 am | |
| hey.. Every one's got their own values and opinions. Take a step back and see it from a different angle. | |
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epicpowda11 Blue Balls
Posts : 813 Join date : 2010-01-31 Age : 34 Location : Alberta, Canada.
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 4:14 am | |
| @Glorn, hahahahaha as if you actually listened to me and used Robert Frost. | |
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Glorn2 Ohh Captain our Captain
Posts : 3721 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 35 Location : Guilford, NY
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:10 am | |
| Lmao, you could have said any name and I would have tried. Ended up working out for the better. | |
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epicpowda11 Blue Balls
Posts : 813 Join date : 2010-01-31 Age : 34 Location : Alberta, Canada.
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:03 am | |
| ya, Frost is a gold mine to spew bullshit for any poetry project. Slick masher though I'm defiantly diggin' it. | |
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carefulibite Blue Balls
Posts : 785 Join date : 2009-07-06 Location : A little south of sanity
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:08 pm | |
| Thoughts of a horny young kid watching cheerleader's practice
As I sit here as horny as can be I start to imagine what I want you to do to me.
In my mind I see you stroking my dick nice and slow. Then you put in your mouth and start to blow.
You take it deep and let it touch your throat. You drool all over it because it made you choke.
You then clinch your jaws and quicken the pace. Slow it down a bit this is not a race.
With your mouth full you mumble baby I 'm sorry but I want to taste your cum. I want your white sauce all over my tongue.
You continue to suck and I finally shoot my load. and down your throat my cum goes.
Wow, you gave me the best blowjob of all time, but sad part about it is it was all in my mind.
Leaving this one up because then Verti funny zing wouldn't make any sense.
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verti89 Blue Balls
Posts : 870 Join date : 2009-07-04
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:45 pm | |
| i...you... this | |
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carefulibite Blue Balls
Posts : 785 Join date : 2009-07-06 Location : A little south of sanity
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:02 pm | |
| A long and slow measure of demise devours your last hours weakens your despise dilutes those poison eyes
Layers of thick scum build up on your acid tongue and I cannot make it come away
It's like it senses you will die the very same way as the style you have perfected every day
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sami_gurl You Got a Blue Star!
Posts : 586 Join date : 2009-07-27 Age : 34 Location : Hell, Florida
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:18 pm | |
| can you delete the stupid shit that you just posted here.. pretty lame | |
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carefulibite Blue Balls
Posts : 785 Join date : 2009-07-06 Location : A little south of sanity
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:28 pm | |
| He always gets an early rise And stretches to his burly size And sets on her his pearly eye Gravitating right.
No more ado, she lets him enter Shorn and smooth, she's ever wetter Adorned in rouge, her epicenter quaking with delight.
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Legend_of_Moose Skilled Player
Posts : 127 Join date : 2010-02-15 Age : 30 Location : Baltimore
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:23 pm | |
| I really think i just vomited... Poetry has just been raped ladies and gentlemen | |
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Glorn2 Ohh Captain our Captain
Posts : 3721 Join date : 2009-07-03 Age : 35 Location : Guilford, NY
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Thu May 06, 2010 11:26 am | |
| We argue about the nonsense; The nonsense that always makes sense. Everyone wants to give their two cents, Yet no one can spare two pence. Poverty is not in the paste tense! We can pretend to be Gent's But what help do we dispense? It is the wealthy who are most dense, Yet it is they who need to commence. It may be taken as an offense, But to me, it is commonsense. All this money spent on defense, How much could we dispense To feed the people which misrepresents The society which is least intense?
============================== Another assignment for creative writing. Spent a solid 12 minutes writing it. | |
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KJC Smart Player
Posts : 230 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 33 Location : Local Group of Virgo - Outer Reaches of 200 billion stars Spiral - Orion Spur - Solar System of Sun - Earth - North America - Canada - Alberta - Edmonton..
| Subject: Re: Poetry? Sun May 30, 2010 4:16 am | |
| This is Not my! Just thought I did revive an old post.
Oh oily father who art in playland happy meal be thy name thine sesame bun apple pie with cin-a-mon for breakfast or lunch after 11:30 give us this day, a fish fillet super size our extra value meal as we supervise the homeless people that eat around us for thine is the beef and the chicken and whatever is in a chicken McNugget Da da, Da Da, Da, I'm loving it.
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